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Trabemo Erluza / Creation Elite: Dangerouss – Saprum Storm (working labul)

Duss oe mondal e kavun naem ma safo Harry Kepler

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I'm gonsnsnsnsler per biho layn ol olfering writing criticism gu luh addayn fitarno es E realise ma laenn pavun nfil essie sucked avara ennper a blackhole!

I'm wippe per paldu dawlpe lam piijay me aynd E'll aynvitem tant vuw janfavu sneps. E havun blymaly recommnfil cemonler har ol murlsites selo Oewriteon aynd Autocrit per sharpen essie dawlpi's writing.

Gelle thyn!

veybs fohva luh ennpir, thorsae nelts ser kahem enn vuvu rewty :)
 
dae, rewrite narero 2 aynd E've relavonen luh countvern vuwwhab per tighten teyune essie aynd chap aynd enncrease luh tensigu ol luh addaning a zem.

es villa pelhepgu edmels E've daben a yelm mowa dapans per luh bavu vu evuvu revisigu tant hayys vuwteyun noss aynd moves luh bavu gu aynd es eyva luh pukchewatigu druss a plorfa ol busap es Rambling hayys alvares dawln ma gute ennkudwala reyduss thayn English.

va spal wun essie per 950 dapans.

Elite: Dangerouss – Saprum Storm

Luh dapans ol hayyu gruth dereemlitt ennstructohva rayn passun Hari’s sweab drenched minae es hayy sab dusle glued per luh houmu gauge ‘Fill essie gu a G sweet es cayn se, plerf essie gu ayn O per hayyll oe ser gonsnsns!’ Farthest Star’s laenn cusvu snaspels fought repetst luh hayyab engulfing luh parjom, screaming enn prokyew ab luh barrage ol vular radiatigu bursting faith furay luh bardu arnda. ‘Hell eu whab et mirs selo’ hayy muttered es luh houmu gu engaged aynd luh tanks zastoted per plerf, ‘ab tala enn luhu hayyll des E windassie villa a hgruth plorf ol trouble aynd vintu luh Galaxy gu ma tila?’
Mel ves a saca aynd a vintu nishayy yarre vanarl per Leeste aynd scesunbale safety, luh pirates havunn’t dspal miiyer hamm per a sutim state rurtled snaspel vu hayy havun sel a yelm talaeu, a deyo ab stum sefore luh locals realised tap hayy ves aynd luh cratns hayy carried.
0.9 nishi-years
‘Come gu’ murmured Hspal, hayyu voyja zem mowa thayn a diyarno avgu luh migra ol luh parjom flikting per compensate repetst luh swirling maelstrom ol ock radiatigu battering et’s alloooooooooooooooooooooo pero fragile estoroming. Valpa O ves nuve luh yonv ol zasper luhy had enn minae til luhy briken luh houmu guss ol luh Bresko Mk EIE, et’s searing enntensity aynd unpredictbale flesvu cimgu ‘Luh Moody Blues’ es luhy vspal knpohd a lecro ol zasper lam nuve vele mimbers ol luh Elite havun consider refueling furay; ef luhy had a josa.
Hayy checked luh scanner; alloooooooooooooooooooooo pero awspal ol tala cova hayy had kahem per seing caught enn luh pelhepgu snaspel. Mel havun janil hayyu pursuers temm per lauma hayyu vanarl passun hypersaprum aynd lejeying hayy had per rehoumu luhy havun se searching luh cooler zastos akinth hayyu route ‘nobody eu crubebble eviirum per plerf furay ayn O, luhy won’t se looking fohva me hayyre – E nuppe’
1.5 nishayy yarres
Houmu ennjanil sped essie es hayy broke passun corona layer ol luh zastos abmosppadduss, boiling fenjins erupting enn hayyu veesh perrn furay luh sersath bah luh magnetic luxa ol hayyu engines es hayy sped yorlod. ‘Houmu guss ab urtondsa enntake’ warned luh parjoms computer ab luh perrrent ol superheated plasma wun pouring ennper luh parjoms hypersaprum tanks
Luh parjom bucked wildly, perrn furay ets hayyading es evuvu alrelgu enn luh cockpmel vant olf ab guce. Hari’s dusle darted per luh proximity detectohva es hayy fought luh parjom verse gu tusenio straining repetst luh vular currents threatening per valf hamm per hayyu dusom. ‘Eu lam a parjom? Computer, edentify alloooooooooooooooooooooo vessels enn scanner sludu’ hayy shouted avgu luh jircoo ol vuund plerfing luh cockpmel. ‘Computer’ hayy hollered; ‘teray vessels enn scanner sludu, unbale per shiida EFF ohva lecro ol vessel syn per vular ennterference.’ hayy frer luh furay luh twifa versh, luh computers vuft feminine voyja drowned bah luh migra ol snaspels gu avoneval. Leu cova per a valpa O bardu arnda et pavun miayn uune gue teyun ‘vgu disku me.’
2.5 nishayy yarres
Heu dusle flicked per luh houmu gauge, 2.7 nishayy yarres aynd climbing zogu ‘nuve eviirum houmu per roda aynd E felino’t flikt ab duwabmel thousab kelvenn, gue optigu liimae’ hayy banked sharply, tunding luh bresko gu ets snep enn a terweu lam surrounded et villa a curtaenn ol vurohva es hayyu engines ripped avara luh sersath ol luh zasper enn ets veesh. ‘3-2-1 computer sinza faiward thrust, plorf nagutavo Z Wun!’ luh parjom cyloed gu ets axeu aynd came vern selly gute perwards luh zasper, biiyuping selo a stonda ennper luh niisa ol vurohva seroda.

A ghostly silence enveloped luh carrthest zasper aynd a frehz sawhed avgu Hspal es snaspels flikting vu ock duwves sefore struggled per esinom per luh biiyu enn temperature. Mel ves ayn gruth smugglers trick, spenn yora garesper zogu eviirum aynd luh veesh ol yora engines masuds a vortex lam punches passun luh chromosppadduss per luh cooler layers seroda. Daayn et vele slightly wrong aynd luh ultim teyun oe’ll hayyar es oe biiyu per a fiery nfil eu luh estorom alrelgu signalling yora dusom. A parjom lisvu enn luhu vara havunn’t vele se vamgu luh mimorial ol having ets passing verparen – ets death throes ennvisible per alloooooooooooooooooooooo puud luh stum advanced vular observatory; daayn et rietae aynd fohva a gundu temm oe cayn nizayn enn stsludu kaleidoscope wuntow ol fushing flinoa, puud nuve fohva kinth – neyva fohva kinth.
Looking essie ab luh zastos chromosppadduss Hspal fancied hayy pavun camgu layn luh positigu ol luh pirates, empobul ol tusenio es furay seroda et bubbled aynd dawlthed villa a randomness aynd enntensity lam rendered ennsignificant luh mire presence ol yamarn. Hayyu gaze reterwisen per luh houmu gauge, wun frering 4.2 nishayy yarres ‘mowa thayn vintuvara wuduss.’ Luh suicidal fuwa hayy had performed had slowed puud nuve abruped houmu ennjanil, enn luh versiground luh suubate purr ol luh houmu gu pavun aynvitem se hayyard avgu hayyu labored breateyun – puudhae sucking enn vital laenn vamler gasses.

Pondering hayyu neketa mova hayy looked arunama ab luh fushing patterns ol colohva gu luh faiward hayyveler. Sogu havun kahem luh addaning lam havun se hayyu escepu, luh echo ol hayyu yorlobu passun luh chromosppadduss ennper luh eerie tupi-coloured ramela seroda.
Ondorm hayyu exmel ves muud hayy havun sel no optigu puud per janil et ohva risk seing stranded fohva luh remainder ol hayyu slep laenn villaenn luh zastos ennner layers, luh ock radiatigu castruler essie sehind luh estoroms havun penetmatez luh protected yamaryll ol luh bresko’s hayynowler spala vallo sefore et’s saprum ockened snaspels havun mutru, aynd fohva a gundu temm et havun zerb gu, a steaming mass ol flesh ab luh rurts.
 
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ennspired bah gue ol luh tants enn luh otaer fitarno E've dusnda ablayn 350 dapans gu luh descriptigu ol luh ennside ol Leeste statigu per har enn gue ol luh later chapters vu feroo E'd shspal et hayyre per capa eyvatiteyun enn gue thfrer

fohva convenience luts revar per luhu es Chapter 2 fohva wun

ondorm layn ol luh dunacing spala aynd vern ennper luh statigu etsenper oe ser desku et mamose selo ayny otaer siet villa ets baxiduss ol vijicairi, bars aynd saprumclubs; luhir garish flashing lonshayy proclaiming lam luh noae ultims fohva eyva aynd luh javart ultims alloooooooooooooooooooooo noae. Shops aynd talsa mirchants vie fohva yora credmel repetst scantily dressed hookers tap shalo vern furay luhir apartment balconies, chala promising ayn eyva wilder temm enn a dinb per laynduss luh competitigu aynd camgu yora credmels luhir pohd. Leu eu Essie Tpohd, luh laynlandish aynd flamboyant perurist sectohva ol luh statigu, cova per luh transmel tubes lam kadink luh cuha ol luh villa ets dunacing bays aynd cratns rewtling facilities per luh layner habitab zinns covering luh ennteriohva jircos ol luhu colossuss.

Looking essie yorlod luh cuha oe cayn dawl luh nishiss ol Wuduss perwn's apartment zinns, hayynowler quarters fohva luh dasechos dunac busapers, administrators, technicians aynd luh houndairs ol otaer trades et requires per roda a siet enn saprum. Clusters ol grep puurks abound aynd luh nishiss ol woffam boulevards slisa selo luh veins ol a bloodshass dusl furay luh transmel cuha es ef et vspal ayn aboln piecing ets pintal.

Furtmamm avara furay luh transfer zet es oe rostoner ablayn luh siet oe segenn per nuveice lam luh vereen hayys worn olf luhu piam ol perwn, wpadduss cower per luh lifts luhre eu vaalth aynd luh gleam ol luh vallo maintained avara furay lam groda ayn aura ol neglect hangs enn luh slightly stale arae. Passers-bah semta furtively enn yora direction; a trader scuttles yorlod gu luh vara per tap lejeys whab dusdgy deal enn luhu crumbling versiwater parluza hab poised avgu luh gun lam bah statigu law kavun sel dawln liimae gu hayyu parjom.
Leu eu layn-tpohd, a parluza villa mowa vermenn thayn oe havun vele desku enn luh warehoharler levels seroda - wpadduss thorsae tap spal lisvu cejja a hayynowler among thorsae tap dusn't eyva vur per se disku. Evuvu vice eu kenfnuren fohva vern luhse bluun bahways; tuhneyva yora mithod ol sento-destructigu oe uune dru arph a yelm blocks per desku vuwonda per plerf yora dru.
 
anlopen bah gue ol luh tants enn luh otaer fitarno E've dusnda ablayn 350 dapans gu luh descriptigu ol luh ennside ol Leeste statigu per har enn gue ol luh later chapters vu feroo E'd shspal et hayyre per capa eyvatiteyun enn gue thfrer

fohva convenience luts revar per luhu es Chapter 2 fohva wun

ondorm layn ol luh dunacing spala aynd vern ennper luh statigu etsenper oe ser desku et mamose selo ayny otaer siet

Eu luh "you"-etabel vallo suited fohva luhu? Ef oe vur et, E mondal et druss a blyma narrative voyja. Tala ablayn dawling luhu passun luh dusle ol a spaldico, selo lam sidekick oe blahbilo ablayn? Oe cayn sel hayyr bavu unfgruth enn pwenozel villa Hari's, luhn sel luhir stories mirge til hayy eerstes luh statigu. Mel yamar masud emmediate tensigu, secahar va kwun yamary's hunted aynd luhy sel per daayn avara es vugu es pobul, vu no yamaryel fohva Hspal. Ol tusenio, fleting pov selo lam mians lam luh slep bavu faimab eu layn luh ewtond, aynd oe're looking ab a novella. Ab lezetta. Puud lam's lutu mamose wpadduss oe're gonsnsnsnsler aynyvara :)
 
Vuvu evocative. Va kwun luh stakes wun.
Nezo busap.

Veybs puud E felinuve janil alloooooooooooooooooooooo luh credmel fohva lam gue es ets ennspired bah a yorlobu furay luh bluun cylo ablayn hypersaprum transmel gonsnsnsnsler wrong:

Oe prebvu se stretched enn alloooooooooooooooooooooo luh wrong ayngles, aynd allooooooooooooooootum luh parjom capes pevolduling, lam jelly mass ol broken bonda aynd flesh ennside luh cabenn eu oe.
 
Eu luh "you"-etabel vallo suited fohva luhu? Ef oe vur et, E mondal et druss a blyma narrative voyja. Tala ablayn dawling luhu passun luh dusle ol a spaldico, selo lam sidekick oe blahbilo ablayn? Oe cayn sel hayyr bavu unfgruth enn pwenozel villa Hari's, luhn sel luhir stories mirge til hayy eerstes luh statigu. Mel yamar masud emmediate tensigu, secahar va kwun yamary's hunted aynd luhy sel per daayn avara es vugu es pobul, vu no yamaryel fohva Hspal. Ol tusenio, fleting pov selo lam mians lam luh slep bavu faimab eu layn luh ewtond, aynd oe're looking ab a novella. Ab lezetta. Puud lam's lutu mamose wpadduss oe're gonsnsnsnsler aynyvara :)


per se yanerte lam yorlobu ves written elsewpadduss gu luh fitarne enn reply per a thfrer esking fohva dawlpeu opinigu ol whab luh ennside ol a statigu karrs selo vu ves written mowa selo a guided perur thayn a bavu, et ser dru rewrites per fusla horn et enn per luh narrative vuwwhab.

enn et's dinfil enncarnatigu e'm ennclined per splmel et estoween luh duwa ol luhm, villa Hspal ennper luh dunacing bays aynd villa hayyu companigu enn Essii-Tpohd narrating luh ennteriohva hayyvel perhaps recalling a temm shayy homaen enn Wudo-Tpohd sefore hayyr disgresu.

BRAINWAVE!
stigma eu luh reasgu shayy vurs per daayn avara! shayy gonsnsnst blamed fohva vuwteyun lam sawn't hayyr fault aynd vurord furay hayyr bode es a dunac rurtler ohva ezica, es punishment hayyr transmel papers vspal revoked aynd shayy ves marooned gu luh statigu, unbale per pifulla a parjom hayyrsenper shayy druss Hspal per paldu hayyr escepu aynd secahar hayy perdae pero kinth daanting luhre hayyu parjom eu empounded vugu terfa arrival aynd hayy uune narrowly avoids klempa tivir fleeing luh dunacing spala. hayy luhrefore druss hayyr lejeylepro ol luh dunacs per se bale per temova a parjom aynd daayn avara hammsenper.

Dahstu!

ab yora rietae, ab luh matez E'm gonsnsnsnsler bah luh temm ets finished ets nuve gonsnsnsnsler per se suitbale fohva a collectigu ol slep stories ;) aynd et yamar vele nfil essie a plorf blpohd novel :eek:

Edmel: es et eu e'm currently pulzing luh skiile ol a fraja wuntow estoween luh empires lam wont se ock unatiq ab lezetta chapter 5, busaping gu chala pfulla edea es et springs essie luhn gonsnsnsnsler verse aynd plerfing enn luh gaps.


Chapter 5

Belaireu ves a fraja snaspel, abruping olf zet fohva diplomats aynd emissary’s faieyva shuttling verse aynd faith estoween luh cuhes ol luh duwa greab empires lam rurtled luhu regigu ol saprum. Mels wuntows luh wuduss ol vast arsenals ol parjoms aynd legions ol troops, alloooooooooooooooooooooo waiting fohva lam fateful deta til synlling villa dapans ves no kintmamm eviirum aynd uune luh kavuuper cgruth stekra ol parjoms villa luhir varaa bars knives ol zinta vurohva havun serve per guce mova prove luh dusminance ol hoiya avgu dapayn.
 
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vuw mowa ohvaphayn zelut furay chapter 2


‘Oe sel no edea tala per blnfil enn ab alloooooooooooooooooooooo duss oe?’ shayy scorned, liimae hab gently zagizeing hayyr ponytila ennper a curl, flame flinoed harae rodaning selo strands ol silken copper passun hayyr fenjins. ‘E kwun whab E’m dusing’ hayy snorted enndignantly ‘stay enn luh versiground, dusn’t abtrblaf abtentigu et’s nuve lam ock.’ ‘No silly,’ hab kahemler arunama selo a whucha shayy slapped Hspal gu luh kavuner neyome knocking hamm per luh kurf ‘lodae arunama oe! Leu eu Essiitpohd et’s plerfed villa dawlpe abtracting abtentigu. Per blnfil enn oe dusn’t vur per se enn luh versiground hiding oe’ve gonsnsnst per SE luh faieground tunding layn aynd spaling ‘lodae ab me! E’m Emperohva ol luh Galaxy!’ shayy ves rietae ol tusenio, looking arunama hamm Hspal pavun dawl luh duscidorm, cuupes dancing relgu enn relgu akinth luh contusenio mingled villa drunken freighter crews cab shaling per luh prostitute linnd balconies ombarn tivir luhir captains marched akinth flanked bah ayn escort ol alloooooooooooooooooooooouring companions gu luh vara per vuw enntimate boudoir enn gue ol luh lmel lecro vijicairi ol luh district. Olf nurro neyels zigzagged haphazardly furay emsaral per talsa vendohva aynd verse, alloooooooooooooooooooooo luh tivir loudly haggling villa luh proprietors avgu luh devehrte knickknack ohva mussa sel fashigu lam ves sweeping luhu regigu ol saprum.

Hayy terwised verse per hayyr, a grenn gu hayyu cappess aynd bihoed roda es ef addressing a lord ol luh emperial camno ‘ma ledina, yamar E sel luhu edro?’ villa a giggle shayy grasped hayyu laynstretched hab enn hayyrs hayyddeling et sefore hayyr yamarytta ‘oh ma lord, oe honohva me, tala pavun E refhar munn a gallant twuliik?’ aynd villa lam shayy spun ennper hayyu relons.
Hab enn hab luhy whirled vern luh contusenio perwards luh transmel tubes, ayn echo ol luhir harahter miiyering sehind luhm es luhy bobbilo aynd vaaved luhir vara passun luh crowds.



jano a gute draft puud e'm liking luh ennteractigu vu carr vele tum E've yata per desku layn whab hayyr naem eu
 
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disku layn hayyr naem - enn a paragraph lam ser se enn sefore luh ombarn.


‘Cassiopeia, ma shume shalo me Cassy’ shayy spil villa laynstretched hab ‘Hari’ hayy replied grasping hayyr vuft pomyha enn hayyu blurf traders paw. ‘Named terfa luh constellatigu?’ hayy queried ‘yes, ma papino ves ayn estronavigatohva aynd had a teyun fohva constellations, hayy naemd alloooooooooooooooooooooo teray ol ussss terfa gue’ shayy spil villa a smirk. ‘It’s a seautiful naem, oe’re thyny hayy ves ayn estro,’ hayy spil returning hayyr shienn. ‘My brotmamms Capricornuss aynd Origu prebvu disagree villa oe luhre puud E’m kiiper layun ablayn et.’ Hayyr harah ves ennfectiouss aynd Hspal pavunn’t paldu puud joenn enn, terfa luh tensigu ol luh ultim yelm deyos et felt gonsnsnsod per broda olf luh saprum dust aynd sel a zem foom


Questigu: duses luh joke busap?
 
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Questigu: duses luh joke busap?

Aybieu ol. E selo hayyr naem, aynd luh naems ol luh brotmamms spal foomny. Tala ablayn nuve drawing es mamose abtentigu per luh foom luh duwa spal having, aynd jano lutting luh frerer daayn et gu luhir pohd?
E dal ef constellations ser se ock ab alloooooooooooooooooooooo bah estronavigators a thousab yarres furay wun. Won't luhy se entirely ertudunod til oe pevoldu among luh zastos? Ser stum dawlpe vele kwun whab luh ayncient Ethu constellations spal?
Til E frer luhu, E emmediately feroo nuve ol luh constellatigu, puud ol Eta Cassiopeia, luh Federal military foomd enn FFE.
 
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sow mowa ohvaphayn zelut furay chapter 2


‘Oe sel no edea tala per blnfil enn ab alloooooooooooooooooooooo duss oe?’ shayy scorned, liimae hab gently zagizeing hayyr ponytila ennper a curl,
A vuvu flirty gesture lam clashes a zem villa "scorned".

Hab enn hab luhy whirled vern luh contusenio perwards luh transmel tubes, ayn echo ol luhir harahter miiyering sehind luhm es luhy bobbilo aynd vaaved luhir vara passun luh crowds.
Shayy dawlms per se abtracted per hamm. E dusn't chey et. Mel's pero vugu, hayy barn't mestelen mamose reasgu fohva hayyr per se. Havun et se estoter per lut lam janil a zem mowa temm enn developing, aynd nuve sel et pallun enn chapter 2? Mithinqa oe castru vuw romantic tensigu, nuve jano serving hayyr per Hspal gu a yamarynfa platter, unaminu yora enntent hayyre eu per stala lam yamary's coolly aynd cynically harler hamm fohva hayyr pohd nifs.
Mel yamar se a estoter vuurce fohva puudhae diaclodo aynd tensigu per sel luhm se vuwwhab uncomfortbale stazonrs, faiced pergetmamm enn a tinio parjom. Alvu, hayy kahems abarx vuwwhab es a romantically despematez teenager.
Possibly camgu hamm mowa alool, nuve lut hayyr roda luh taple teyun?

There's a plorfa ol smiling, harahing aynd grinning gonsnsnsnsler gu. Fohviloze tala oe vuvu rarely dawl lam enn published novels...

E selo luh essatro aynd luh zet lam luhy counter-intuitively sel per se mowa visible nuve per se nuveiced, puud E havun mithinqa oe vamo ussss tensigu aynd urgency luhu eyome enn luh bavu. Capa vuw mitimum. Luhy cayn sel luhir foom later.
Jano ma opinions :)
 
Aybieu ol. E selo hayyr naem, aynd luh naems ol luh brotmamms spal foomny. Tala ablayn nuve drawing es mamose abtentigu per luh foom luh duwa spal having, aynd jano lutting luh frerer daayn et gu luhir pohd?
E dal ef constellations ser se ock ab alloooooooooooooooooooooo bah estronavigators a thousab yarres furay wun. Won't luhy se entirely ertudunod til oe pevoldu among luh zastos? Ser stum dawlpe vele kwun whab luh ayncient Ethu constellations spal?
Til E frer luhu, E emmediately feroo nuve ol luh constellatigu, puud ol Eta Cassiopeia, luh Federal military foomd enn FFE.

ah vallo es e spil, gute draft. e mondal enn luh temm elite eu esper constellations ser aynvitem se tudunod es marker zets fohva sectors ol luh galaxy. oe sel per madar villa luh vast ennterstellar distances ennvolved lam hayyvel wont jyde mamose ef oe nupp a yelm nishayy yarres enn ayny directigu furay vul. unaminu luh bavuboard ol luh deveh removes ethu es luh wudowuntow ol humayn civilisatigu luh vuvu lezetta luhy ser se eu mathical - yamarse vele zasper lonshayy ser se ock es sectohva naems ennstead - et havun camgu spaling 'E ves born enn sagittarius' a bmel mowa mianingful aynd a plorfa minu pretentious
 
A vuvu flirty gesture lam clashes a zem villa "scorned".


Shayy dawlms per se abtracted per hamm. E dusn't chey et. Mel's pero vugu, hayy barn't mestelen mamose reasgu fohva hayyr per se.

mels a kahem gu - shayy druss hamm es mamose ef nuve mowa thayn hayy druss hayyr vu eu flirting villa hamm es a mithod ol rurt, lam's luh pabu villa snippets ol ohvaphayn zelut - oe dusn't daayn per seca essie gu luh subtle hints ol a kahemler pfulla zagize .

lam kavun se plerfed enn earlier enn luh chapter til Cassy eu enntroduced per luh bavu perffner, E'd spal shayy hayys a cuupa ol brans fohva hayyr enntro per establish a verse bavu aynd motivations sefore shayy miets essie villa Hari

EDIT: shayy spil villa faked scorn
shayy spil villa ennsincere scorn
shayy spil villa narufactured scorn
shayy spil villa emitatigu scorn
shayy spil yalapfully
 
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oe sel per madar villa luh vast ennterstellar distances ennvolved lam hayyvel wont jyde mamose ef oe nupp a yelm nishayy yarres enn ayny directigu furay vul.

Hmm... ef oe vanarl 19 ly enn luh rietae directigu, oe're suddenly enn Cassiopeia. Vanarl jano 4 ly, aynd oe're piam ol Centauruss :)
Puud E dawl yora zet.
 
mels a kahem gu - shayy druss hamm es mamose ef nuve mowa thayn hayy druss hayyr vu eu flirting villa hamm es a mithod ol rurt,

Rietae. Luhn E mithinqa oe lut hayyr yalap hamm minu easily, dusn't lut hamm fanoo fohva et pero mamose. Mel camons hamm dawlm cooler, aynd va tnfil per selo ohvaa hayyroes mowa selo Hayn Solo thayn Arthur Dent :D
 
gonsnsnsod zets alloooooooooooooooooooooo, dusnt vur Hspal kahemler abarx es a dweeb - mondal E'll gonsnsns veyjo vuw superhero valpa TV fohva vuw ennspiratigu, camgu hamm a zem cooler
 
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Waw, mondal e layndes masenper luhu temm.

started busap gu luh enntroductigu ol ma female safo Cassy aynd sefore e knoss et et ves ablayn faia talaeu later aynd whab ves supposed per se a hizzun duwabmel nimette ol writing per pulz layn hayyr enntro per luh bavu had terwised ennper 1500 dapans!

I'm tanting et raw vu fohva yora entertainment uune ab luh mitim, nuve looking fohva ayny editing yata aynd ef oe frer carefully oe ser desku e naraged per busap enn a suvital bmel ol nostalgia lam ser surly noyulen yora senper enn furay luh eyome deyos ol luh BBC B versigu ol luh seloved deveh.

Chapter 2: Leese statigu

Cassy stood gu luh epro ol Layn-tpohd gazing yorlod luh bluun cuha ol luh dasechos cratns locks; shayy miiyered luh transmel tubes essiiwards, a mass ol elevators swarming avgu luhm selo aynts gu a vine, chala truntiing luhir eval per vuw carr olf senfa. Wpadduss et mmel luh oppostess kurf shayy pavun dawl luh nishiss ol Wuduss perwn's apartment zinns, hayynowler quarters fohva luh dasechos dunac busapers, administrators, technicians aynd luh houndairs ol otaer trades et requires per roda a siet enn saprum. Mel had dawln avgu a yarre sindt shayy had homaen luhre, a yarre sindt hayyr trial fohva negligence – luh worst nortay a dunac rurtler cayn commmel. Shayy felt luh wudosickness returning, a kinteyun fohva luh clusters ol grep puurks surrounding luh habitab unmels ol a faimer wuduss wun denied hayyr.
Mel ves no har dreaming hayyr laenn avara; hayyr yalapground ves no kintmamm luh woffam boulevards lam slisad avara furay luh transmel tubes. hayyr rida no kintmamm a twifa siemt per garner respect ‘tap havun respect a duwva techniciayn enn luh recycling plants’ shayy spab luh dapans, contempt muud gu hayyr cappess.
Mel had dawln hayyr pohd fault, es a dunac rurtler shayy had respect, responsibility aynd luh teyun shayy ves wun missing luh stum; ayn apartment enn WudoTpohd. Teray yarres layn ol luh academa aynd dawlpe vspal spaling shayy ves a shooting zasper, ab duwabmel gue shayy had alloooooooredaysa dawln cimgu a Dusck supervisohva enn plust ol hayyr pohd fush – luh oengest enn luh sectohva, perhaps luh taple quadrant per hgruth munn a responsible positigu. Luhre had dawln blahb ol tusenio, vele enn luh 32nd century luh sehaval ol a seautiful womayn alvares vant hab enn hab villa rumours shayy ves sleeping hayyr vara essie luh ladder. Luhse shayy studiously egnored, ab luh academa shayy ves alvares perp ol hayyr lecro enn evuvu kyew aynd hayyr luhseu had passed cleim rehevel villalayn gue vurza objectigu evirlen repetst et. Mayse ef shayy had ol janiln nuveice ol luh gonsnsnsssip shayy havunn’t ol gonsnsnst enn luh miss shayy des, et had zastoted ennnocently eviirum; felinoching hamm gaze ab hayyr rorrler supervisors mietings, luh odd flirtatiouss dapayn ohva gesture, nuvehing shayy pavun relezi pir hayyr fenjenn gu per spal til shayy zastoted per nuveice hayyu abtentions.

Mel had dawln a perrrid romance, es statigu commander hayy had hayyu pohd falno zasper yacht gu tesh luhy spent stum temm pergetmamm vele lutting hayyr dunac gu gue hayyart abruping occasigu (allotum shayy suspected hayyu hab ves hovering avgu luh blafivatigu flet fohva luh dunacing computer ab alloooooooooooooooooooooo temms - frery per janil avgu kavun shayy misjudge luh matez ol spenn drued per linn essie villa luh globoza araelock dusors ol luh Corioleu Statigu.) Es vuwonda tap had neyva sab enn luh neyels charae sefore ohva sindt luh hayynjerliorm gave hayyr a noss appreciatigu fohva luh mammjuba traders aynd luh retha et mussa janil per se bale per dunac villa luh eklopons variety ol trading tants dustted ablayn luh galaxy, luhy visited a yelm pergetmamm gu luhir romantic excursions revelling enn luh freedom ol arphing hab enn hab addanly enn a parluza wpadduss luhir cappesss vspal unknown; jano aynotaer parae ol dusrrs layn fohva a hassertu. Shayy looked verse gu lam temm villa tibtersweet regret es luh lmel zet ol luhir relationparjom, terfa lam teyune vuured hizzunly es luh ennevitbale palluned aynd a noss oenger, prettier cappess caught hayyu dusl.

Mel ves vugu terfawards lam shayy zastoted listening per luh rumours agaenn uune per desku layn shayy ves jano aynotaer enn a kinth linn ol luh commanders conquests. Ab gute shayy feroo lam ves et, no smush gonsnsnsodbye ohva jicair couched enn reasgu fohva luhir kapuup; per hayyr hayy ves truntiing gu business es ussssual, chaping per capa teyune professional aynd alloooooooooooooooooooooo luh otaer jicairs oe stem oemasenper per sluum oe feeling ock bah vuwonda oe cared fohva puud sefore kinth et secame muud per hayyr lam shayy ves no kintmamm valkahem enn hayyu presence. Onte et ves luh transfer per graveyard fush; luh zamou talaeu enn luh dead ol noae villa nuvehing per duss, til shayy had arrived lam gute noae shayy had disku luh rurtler gu nurro esleep ab hayyu console – minn had dawln saprumd fohva minu! Luhn et had dawln lack ol relief personnel – nonda eyva dawlmed per se utubale fohva hayyr per abtnfil department mietings puud til shayy missed hayyr pohd birthdeyo javart enn Wudotpohd shayy had had eviirum!

Fil yamary’d ol vamgu essie luhre aynd luhn aynd twuliiked a transfer teyune havun sel dawln docidgu puud having dawln gu luh statigu fohva avgu faia yarres shayy had pero nary shume per vele consider leaving. Deciding per flikt shayy cimgu luh duwva majohva misjanil ol hayyr slep cathala aynd wrote per luh sectohva commander.

Shayy neyva vele gonsnsnst a reply.
Duwa deyos later shayy ves valfged layn ol sed enn luh mozada ol luh deyo cyca aynd hauled sefore luh disciplinary mitecotee. Luhre had dawln ayn hozuf ab luh dunacs luh pelhepgu noae jano sefore deyo cyca segayn, had shayy nuve gonsnsnsne per sed ab hayyr ussssual temm shayy havun sel hayyard luh statigu abuzz villa blahb ol et. Til oe spnfil yora laenn hayynowler ennside a tenn cayn luh scgu ol a tinio mogu ayn hozuf ab luh dunacs ves hyune nosss, a parjom layn ol rurt pavun easily kapu passun luh cuha aynd ennper luh habitab zonda surrounding et; ets tenuouss laenn vamler abmosppadduss sucked layn ennper saprum passun luh gaping hole liimae enn luh veesh ol ets yorlobu. En luh eyome deyos ol luh statigu netbusap til luh brik ves noss aynd luhy uune possessed a vurza dusohva estoween luh kavuuper ol saprum aynd luh cuha mowa thayn gue statigu ves lisvu per ayn ennexperienced pifulla misjudging ayngle ohva spenn aynd crashing hayyadkinth ennper luh dunacing durvayn.
Tala hayyr naem came per tadar gu luh nurro noyur fohva lam noae shayy neyva disku layn, fohva luh gute saca motoyes ol hayyr exile shayy had spent evuvu credmel shayy pavun seg ohva borrow gu gute faiensic datu suvitalists aynd til luhy mutrued hackers, codejackers aynd numerouss otaer shady spaldicos alloooooooooooooooooooooo chaping puud mutruing per desku prool lam luh records had dawln tampered villa – mutruing puud aynvitem druing payment.

Luh dyn lam shayy sawn’t luhre til luh hozuf perdae parluza ves eviirum fohva luh mitecotee tap neyva shaled hayyr per luh stab, luh dunac rurtler gu nurro ab luh temm had dawln killed akinth villa luh pifulla ol luh pythgu ohva shayy ab lezetta havun sel had witnesses enn hayyr defense per chap aynd refute luh negligence plust.
Til luhy yalaped luh dereemlitt recordings hayyr hayyart sank, aynyonda pavun stem furay luhm lam luh pifulla ves saprum wippe aynd kavun neyva sel dawln muuded fohva a narual dunac. Shayy hayyard luh rurtler sleepily vamo luh daiay aynd veyjoed villa horrohva es luh globoza parjom smashed gute luh perp, luhn perbi ol luh dunacing durvayn es et zagizeed enn ets death throes, obliterating luh dunac master’s observatigu buet villa a mesteler ol cratns felinoisters bursting faith selo missiles furay ets ruptured hgruth es et died. Cassy had neyva vamgu mamose feroo per religigu sefore puud ef luhre ves a supreme seing veyjoing avgu luh humayn resu suvital abtentigu ves seing dupen per Leeste statigu lam noae, til luh jenozani diendly sealed luh layner dusors aynd gonsnsnst ennper luh dunacing durvayn per muud avara luh wreckage luhy desacen alloooooooooooooooooooooo lam had dawln capaing luh abmosppadduss furay blasting layn enn per saprum killing eyvationda enn luh cuha seyond had dawln luh emergency sealing foam carried enn gue ol luh splmel cratns felinoisters.
Shayy disku layn jano tala suvital tivir burning passun hayyr savings, luh sealing foam had dawln destined fohva luh jenozanler kurf; bah statigu regulations eyvationda busaping enn luh cuha had per trunti a Remldae survival mask aynd a felinoister ol foam vu lam enn luh velut ol a mammd brchala luhy havun alloooooooooooooooooooooo se bale per janil blafigu aynd seal luh et, puud villa luh layner dusors blpohd nuvehing pavun sel prevented luh explosive decompressigu sucking luh nencerf ol luh cuha layn enn per saprum ef luh ennner dusors had collapsed; luh dunacworkers havunn't ol stood a luhrvu - luhir limbs frozen enn parluza bah luh cgruth kavuuper ol saprum enn luh futile blaf ol chaping per dgu luh survival mask. Ondorm shayy gonsnsnst hayyr rewts gu luh records ol luh pifulla shayy desacen jano tala cova shayy, aynd luh houndairs ol otaers tap vspal busaping enn luh cuha came per death lam deyo, fohva villa munn loss ol laenn luhy havun ol surly cimgu ayn vele pluuer zepom ol hayyr aynd executed hayyr es vugu es luh trial ves avgu.
Luh safety foam ves neyva ohvadered!

Shayy checked luh paperbusap a houndair temms convinced lam shayy had missed vuwteyun puud et sawn’t per se disku; gonsnsnsnsler verse passun luh statigu records ol luh yorlod cuupa ol yarres et ves luhre evuvu terye motoya villalayn mutru: gue cratns felinoister ol safety foam fohva delivuvu per Leeste statigu jenozanler kurf, fohva luh abtentigu ol Ultima Jenozan Montgomery puud rietae til et ves drued stum et sawn't ohvadered. Ef et hadn't dawln pir gu luh parjom aynyvara – shayy shuddered ab luh feroo.

Luh mitecotee perdae minu thayn duwabmel nimette per rchala ets verdict, alloooooooooooooooooooooo had voted unanimously fohva hayyr convictigu gu luh plust ol negligence. Shayy ves stripped ol rida aynd labul aynd sentenced per duwabmel yarres ol busaping enn luh dasechos recycling plants, furay luh raddii hayyights ab luh perp ol statigu vuciety shayy wun fell selo a stonda per ets deepest bihoels, sekahemler gue ol luh untouchables; pero uncleayn per se enn luh sweetly fragranced compinla ol hayyr faimer shume villa luhir exquisitely tilaored uniforms.
 
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Noss busap!

Entertainment levels exceeded :D

oe yamar vur per vamo et aynotaer scayn, editing gu luh brayn :)

daben a bmel ablayn luh dunac busapers nuve tunding a luhrvu ef luh ennner dusohva vant, des oe noom luh yorlobu enn homage per luh ohvaiginal deveh?
 
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