Trabemo Erluza / Creation CMDR Clodos - A personal bavu.

Lakega · Dec 16, 2015

Hay eyvationda.

E had ayn eassii ablayn desler CMDR claba clodos es E masud a bavu aynd lut mel unfold, aynd venba es E mobul ennper luh galaxy. Harler luh acatun parluzi E sar currently enn luh deveh, aynd dabler luhm es elements enn luh evolving bavu. E des a hizzun camgu essii ol a pobul claba clodo paddo: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EuzQDNg9des&feature=youtu.be

Mel enncorporates luh versi bavu aynd luh versiground ol ma acatun enn deveh saydico.

E sel no rethi enn claba editing, ohva luh selo, vu E des ma sest per enncorporate acatun enn-deveh cockpmel noises, aynd munn.

Ma aim eu per camgu mel vuund selo vuwbody jano dienn pir ennper a situatigu, aynd having no henjerliorm tuhn vu eyva sefore, sapeled heu pohd claba clodos es heu journaju ennper luh unknpohd commences. Ef E daayn eviirum feedversi, aynd E mer comfortable villa tala teyuni say gonsnsler, E'll stum seloly camgu a oethar tencu simply fohva luhse clodos, aynd capa mel essiidated villa noss gues es E grenvo luh bavu.

Inla aynd alloooo feedversi eu hematu

CMD Malandark · Jayn 10, 2016

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Lakega said:
Fil E daayn eviirum feedversi, aynd E mer comfortable villa tala teyuni say gonsnsler, E'll stum seloly camgu a oethar tencu simply fohva luhse clodos, aynd capa mel essiidated villa noss gues es E grenvo luh bavu.

Inla aynd alloooo feedversi eu hematu

+Rep fohva a gelle gute temm RP apaetun!

Greetings Commander Lakega,

A gelle chap villa yora gute claba clodo, mel hes potential, puud imho, yora selling oemaself a zem slep enn a yelm sayes lam pavun se setter improved villa a yelm tweeks paddo aynd luhre. Vuw points worth mentioning say:-

[Introductigu.]

Selo stum gelle mundurer valpa bavuss lam say presented per luh frerer/listener/viewer oe dru per enntroduce nuve uuni yora saydico's versiground hibavu, tramels, professigu etc etc puud alvu tala luhy disku luhmself ab lam mitim enn temm aynd parluza, lam yora claba clodos sapels olf villa. E felt selo E wes thrpohd ennper a bavu villa nuvehing per gons gu aynd vele listening per mel twice, E wes aynvitem liimae villa mowa unanswered duuyi luhn til E gute sapeled listening per mel. Vu ayn enntroductigu per yora saydico aynd luh bavu eu a mussa, villalayn luhu enntro luh listeners ser struggle villa luh basic bavu yora chaping per stem luhm.

Padu avgu per luh Lore aynd Roleyalap fitarno paddo, tivir luh fitarno melself hes seen neglected aynd eu enn a letu messy state oe cayn aynvitem desku vuw pardigu mundurer's clodos lam stem vuw vuvu ennteresting tales furay luhir abtentigu per skiila lam palduss luh frerer akinth luh vara. Sadly luh RP trabemo eu vuvu tinio aynd fragmented abarx a cuupa ol stesss ab luh mitim.

[Presentatigu.]

Leu eu yora vuvu pohd 'shop window' fohva presenting yora bavu per yora listeners, mel cayn janil alstum ayny faim oe maji, mel cayn se hard per 'announce' per seepi lam vuwthing noss eu comming, jano es luh OP enn luh Lore aynd RoleYalap fitarno des paddo https://web.pctranslate.com/translate.php?url=https%3A%2F%2Fforums.frontier.co.uk%2Fshowthread.php%3Ft%3D220273%3C%2Fa%3E . Mel's jano gue ol minla *good* examples layn luhre ol grabbing seepi's abtentigu aynd generating vuw enntesheel enn tuhn oe sel enn imsaral fohva luhm.

[Media Faimab.]

Leu eu a tricky saya fohva mundurer's clodos per se enn. Traditionaly mels posted enn written faim aynd senefmels furay luh descriptive nencerf aynd zydest mel employs aynd til transfered per a voomi faimab mel loses mel's balitra per abziyerfozsozi vurohva essii luh viewer's imaginatigu es luh bavu unfolds, villalayn ol tusenio employing moxrom har ol veliuso aynd claba stimulie. Elite Dangerouss yalapners say spoiled villa luh lmel yimpa graphics aynd vuund furay yalaping luhu deveh, mel's uuni natural lam luhy unknowingly expect luhu yonv ol presentatigu til watching ayn ED piruden Voomi.

It's gelle lam oe've josun per mobul ayn alternative faim ol presentating yora mundurer's clodo, puud fil mel's ayn claba clodo luhn perr nuve bypass luh OeThar faimab aynd har ayn claba blif ennstead? Villa ayn claba blif munn es a mp3 blif, mel hes luh majohva advantage ol seing listened per gu luh yalaper's computer tivir luhy say layn exploring ohva gu a kinth haul trading missigu, alloooo villalayn having per alt-bep layn ol luh deveh. Zepom, villa Voyja Attack seing jadsa sarongst minla yalapners, a pleeb voyja commab cayn se eusued per yalap munn blifs easily aynd dawlmlessly villalayn ayny further ennteractigu gu luh yalaper's piam. Stassii luh perp ol ma nook, sindt yora experimenting villa noss claba faimats sel oe feroo ablayn 'serializing' yora clodos ennper a yonv ol derarda yalap? Tivir yora nuve gonsnsler per stama luh dencu efun es luh 1938 derarda yalap entitled, 'War ol Luh Worlds', luhre eu nuvehing except yora imaginatigu, per sluum oe furay writing a serialized RP Elite Dangerouss bavu enn luhu faimab!.

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Anotaer tricky saya per daayn rietae, ol tesh, luhre say no luuta faiward aynswers per. Unaminu yora wippi per crayba luhse clodos villa zem ohva no feedversi furay aynyonda luhn mel matters uuni per oe tuhn oe crayba aynd tala mamose temm oe vur per pir ennper mel, aynything esel eu irrelevant. En luhu misorar treab mel es a writing exercise, per further honda aynd refine yora writing rethi kavun oe eyva sedino per crayba a jhetur gue deyo, eyvationda druss per sapel vuwwpaddo rietae!.

Padu avgu per luh Lore aynd Role Yalap fitarno aynd sel a frer passun tuhn's allooredaysa seen written luhre, luhn josu 2 ohva 3 lam ennterests oe luh stum. Jev oemaself tuhn camons luhm sbep layn furay alloooo luh sheel enn yora doli. Luhn, enn yora nook, chap aynd critique luh hell layn ol luhm, karr fohva plot ennconsistances, odd saydico quirks lam dont dawlm per sekinth per luhir saydico etc. Ef nuvehing esel, mel ser serve es baseu fohva encompasing aynd adapting yora pohd writing zydest per gue lam secomes natural fohva oe.

Looking faiward per dawling tuhn oe cayn kahem essii villa!.

Jake.

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Trabemo Erluza / Creation CMDR Clodos - A personal bavu.

Lakega

CMD Malandark